Thursday, November 3, 2011

[MC74 and Friends] my entries for CLOUDS

My dear twin BiTi, fellows PNEH, painters, poets, Mr. Kiu and other cloud lovers in the Forum,

Here are my contributions to CLOUDS

1: Ma^y ngu? tre^n tro*i\ (for my twin BiTi who loves to sleep on clouds)
2: Ma^y soi xuo^ng' nu*o*c'
3: Ma^y trong thanh\ pho^'
4: Ma^y ngoai\ canh' ddo^ng\
5: Ma^y qua cu*a? so^?
6: Ma^y hoang\ ho^n
7: Ma^y ho^ng\

Goodnight
from be^n Bo*\ So^ng
MC








We’ve come to this needing more space,
To the dreadful let’s both move on.
I reached for the bottle of grace,
Sipping spiked tea until you’re gone.
Yet you shapeshift by my window,
Ragging offgrays over my street.
So listen, when next my heart beats
Take the cue, have a last puff, go.
Mai Uyen



at 10:03 AM
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8 comments:

  1. kisamuse2November 3, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    Mai Chau oi!! Beautiful Clouds!!!
    Liem thich nhat la " Cloud in the pond"!!!
    Cheers,
    Liem

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  2. kisamuse2November 3, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    Đẹp lắm, MC. T thích nhất composition của Mây Trên Cánh Đồng. Sao không làm thêm một bài thơ đi kèm? :-)

    Đang đợi coi có ai sẽ post bài Mây Lang Thang?


    Triet

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  3. kisamuse2November 3, 2011 at 10:18 AM

    Dear Twin,

    I love your clouds especially the pink ones. I think that's the only time I like pink :-))

    XOs,
    BT

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  4. kisamuse2November 3, 2011 at 5:08 PM

    Beautiful clouds pictures MC oi, and the titles are so poetic...

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  5. kisamuse2November 5, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    Thank you twin for your sweet comment and being always so supportive. If you notice I change the color of my writing, just for you , hi hi.
    XOs
    your twin MC

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  6. kisamuse2November 5, 2011 at 9:05 AM

    Thank you Khanh' Lie^m, Ngoc. Lan and Trie^t' for your super kind comments.

    Trie^t' o*i, co' bao nhie^u von^' lie^ng' MC na(n. mai~ mo*i' ra duoc bai\ tho* con nhai' ho^m truo*c', la^y' dda^u ra chu*~ ma\ lam\ the^m bai\ khac' nu*a~.

    MC

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  7. kisamuse2November 5, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    MAI CHAU OI
    YOUR CLOUDS ARE SO BEAUTIFUL ! LIKE BiTi , I LOVE THE FIRST ONE AND THE LAST ONE . BT , CAN YOU MAKE A LITTLE PLACE FOR ME IN YOUR CLOUDY BED ? IT LOOKS SO COMFORTABLE ! BIZ HL

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  8. kisamuse2November 6, 2011 at 10:21 AM

    Hello Mai Chau

    For the avid, self professed cloud lover
    such lovely, dreamy pictures that captured fondly the beauty, if not,
    the essence of clouds, nature's elusive yet alluring, pretty sight

    Very creative spins on the illustrations of clouds, in myriad settings,
    showcased under different, appealing angles

    1) a splendid vision of clouds, heavenly sea of serenity
    amid the soothingly blue sky
    2) the charming reflection of cloud on the pond,
    a leisurely, drifty float on the gentle side
    3) urban cloud adding a warming feel, a softening touch of levity
    to the more seemingly rigid, cifitied structures

    4) billlowy, tenderly white clouds hovering on the horizon,
    lending subtle depth to the long, narrow, winding country road

    5) moving clouds passing by the window,
    a picturesque moment, so artistically framed, delicately frozen in time

    6) fleeting clouds on a hasty move, to make it home,
    before the dark, gloomy night set in

    7) angelic, joyous, pink clouds in the firmament ,
    the blissful imagery of glowing happiness, so romantically pictured
    a perfect illustration of "Ma^y Ho^ng" in all its splendor

    Quang

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